10 thoughts on “Breath On An Atom”

  1. Yeah, I like this one a lot. Fav line:

    Conception, establish,
    The eons, the hour.

    I know when you wrote that you were like ‘wow, I’m good’. And you are:)


    1. Thank you! That line was not the original. I read it over and changed it. There was an, ‘Ahh, that’s better!’ moment. For you to recognise that and to comment on it speaks volumes of your talent. Thank you so much. It’s lovely to receive positive feedback. :)x


      1. I did. I really like the way you write. I will visit soon and play catch up. I get overwhelmed if I follow to many. I prefer to be a stalker behind the scenes!


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