The following is a collaborative piece done with Simon over at http://isimonfiction.wordpress.com/
A fabulous poet with a flare for matching style and content.
Eyes open wide, I lie quite still
In nightmare’s frozen grasp
While chilling hands reach out to me.
In silence, I scream and gasp.
This latest victim gripped by fear
In night, my precious friend,
With stealth I move, ever close,
Another soul to tend.
Paralysed hold has made me bold,
My insides start to quiver,
Limbs cannot move to aid or flee
But tremors, inside, shiver.
I sense her terror, intoxicating,
A drug that spurs me on,
Her beating heart and panting breath,
To me, a siren’s song.
Only wakened eyes can see the one
And terror courts my soul,
While human manifested lust
Envelops body whole.
Revealed to her in gloried form,
Such fear so swift engendered,
Dark desires, so physical,
Soon powerfully rendered.
The fear, such fear, does haunt me still,
Suppressed as best I can.
This darkened lover in the night
Had not the face of man.
These glowing eyes of hellish depths,
Of fire and ice in fusion,
Drink in her form so prostrated,
From a face not one bit human.
At shudders end, I claimed my body
But sat up staring wide
Who had penetrated me, untouched,
But felt so deep inside?
Withdrawn from deed so darkly done,
My presence deep within
No touch of flesh so needed
To grant an inner sin.
I looked to see in mirror’s frame
And laughter I heard there,
A distant sense of eyes beheld,
Reaching from some lair.
I watch reaction from afar
As she stares at her reflection.
My wicked mirth I cannot hide
At our newly formed connection.
Molested by the darkest night
And darkest soul of all.
Orgasmic pleasure be subdued,
Temptation from the Fall.
EEEK! How creepy!
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It is a bit, I agree.x
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Is it conceited to ‘like’ this? I don’t care, I loved writing it with you 🙂
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Not conceited enough, in my opinion. 🙂 x
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This is so real it gave me shivers. Our fight is not with earthly things… you describe that reaching arm so well, lest we ever forget.
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You, Susan, have utterly grasped the meaning.x
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This was beautiful. I love how the poem’s from the perspective of the victim… but also terror itself. It’s very imaginative. That is how it’s set out, right? If I’ve got it wrong, please tell me. 😛
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No, you’ve got it spot on. Glad you saw that. I took one part while Simon took the other. Glad you enjoyed it. Terror is out there in many guises. Now, sleep well! Only kiddin”, that’s just cruel. 🙂
Seriously, thanks for reading and commenting. x
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You both blended this together beautifully with uniquely compatible voices. Very nicely done indeed.
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Thank you, Cubby. Your praise I take as of the highest order. Simon would agree, I’m sure. x
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Wow you two. A poetic duet that tells a beautifully frightening tale. Well crafted. I can’t wait to see what comes next from each of you individually now. Loved this piece.
Keep Writing
JMC
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely comment. 🙂 x
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I feel a succubus here. I really enjoyed reading both sides. Kind of brought back some scary memories of an event of my own. Perhaps I will write of it at some point. Both of you work very well off of each other.
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Thank you. It was a pleasure working with Simon. He really knows his stuff. I’d be interested in your story. x
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I shall attempt to compose it sometime in the near future. I will let you know when I put it up so you will know to read it.
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Good stuff. I’ll be really interested.x
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Looked up succubus to double-check. Or incubus? x
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I know succubus is the female “demon”, so I guess yours would be incubus. The piece could be either a man or a woman in the position of victim.
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So it could.x
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ahh really creepy and probably not the best thing to read late at night 😦
a very talented collaboration.
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Thank you. Please sleep well. 🙂 x
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Reblogged this on scottishmomus and commented:
Had to reblog…..fitted the prompt so well!
http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/2014/02/16/prompt-43-supernatural-lust/
A bit adult rated. Warning as per instructions! 😉
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Awesome! Great melding of your styles- and spooky as anything!
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Thank you, Cole. It was spooky. And I haven’t collaborated since. Though it was fun to do. 🙂 x
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Oh this is deviously dark and creepy,, absolutely perfect choice
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I saw your post and this came to mind right away! Definitely creepy. I’ll be looking out for your other prompts. 🙂 x
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wow – you really raised goosebumps with this
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Thank you. Goosebumps there were in the writing. 🙂 x
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Glad you took up the challenge, nice, dark and ever so lovely. Hope to see more of you at Yves prompts 🙂 x creepy collaboration…fun aren’t they?
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They are a bit. 😉 I’ll be looking out for more. 🙂 x
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She posts every Sunday night 😉 x
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Ooh, ta! I’ll check it out tomorrow. Time to hit the hay on a working night. Bummer. 😉 x
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I meant her tomorrow lol so that one last night was Sunday..yesterday..time differences…ech 😦 sweet dreams my pretty broowhahaaa.
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Feck I still don’t know what day of the week it is in all the parts. 😉 Night, night, lovely. 🙂 x
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🙂 night x
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When I saw this was a collaboration with Simon, I knew you would both write something nice and steamy…great poem and nicely lusty:)
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Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 x
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W.O.W x
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A good WOW? 😉
I got your email. Been up to my eyes the last wee while. Be in touch soon. 🙂 x
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Yes of course it is a good WOW, SS!
No worries. Take your time. A lot has been happening at my end. It’s all good. Sending you happy, joyful vibes and energy. Hugs x
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🙂 Thank you SS. To you too. Hope you’re feeling better. I’ll be on the ball soon. Just got loads on at the moment. But doing my damndest to keep ahead! 😉 Hugs and love.x
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