Washed by waves of beauty
On the shore,
Caressed by balmy water
To the core,
Relaxed into the sands of time
And sleep,
Succumb unto unconsciousness,
The deep
Darker plains surrounded though
With light,
Relieving fear, engendered
By the night.
A welcome swell of ocean
Bathes my soul,
Cleansing warmest water
Makes me whole.
Very nice! 🙂
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Well, you took my feet to the ocean. I just went with the flow. 🙂 x
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It seems like you’ve used a very deliberate structure. It’s very effective, it perfectly mimics the ebb and flow of a sea swelling tide. There is nothing quite like the smell of the ocean, and the searing cool of the surf. I find nothing beats a bad bout of melancholy like a dump in the ocean.
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Love it. So….calming and yet magnificent when wild. Glad you enjoyed it.x
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aww, yes. I love this and it too makes me whole 🙂
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🙂 Glad you could relate. 🙂 x
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This was very soothing to read. Very calming. Love it. 🙂
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Once again, Cubby, your praise is honour indeed. 🙂 x
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Beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂 x
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Beautifully soothing…
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So everybody reading it is going to be so mellow. Or half asleep. 🙂 Glad you enjoyed and thanks for your comment. 🙂 x
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