Haiku x 5 . Daily Post Challenge
Conscious mind desists,
Over at last, diminished
Light, a flick of wrist.
Sleep softly at last,
Angelic wings fan fever,
Calmness comforts soul.
Portents of future
Glimpsed in dreamlike journeying,
Recalled in waking.
Funnelled coloured light,
Filtered through stained, rainbow glass,
Brighter hued delight.
Authorship of mind,
Penned for public perusal,
Co-owned thoughts outlined.
Lovely Haiku!
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Thank you. It’s not really my forte. Probably too short for me. ;)x
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Good to get out of your comfort zone then, cheers!
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Thanks. I’ll need to go and do an epic now. :)x
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Fun I can’t wait to read 🙂
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Phew! :)x
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🙂
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Very nice, I love the first stanza
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Thanks, Kerry. :)x
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These are wonderful! Such beautiful language. I didn’t see you on the list. I think I went blind, there were so many!!
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I only decided yesterday to do it so you’ve maybe been in and out without my name even being there yet. I actually quite enjoyed doing them. Even though short is not my forte! :)x
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You did a great job!
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Thank you! :)x
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Succinct – short can have just as much impact – you have shown it (pokes tongue out) 🙂 x
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Oh, I know. Some of the best sermons or talks I’ve ever heard have been when the speaker spoke up, shut up and sat down. Still got the point across. I might have to try a few more haikus and see if I can teach myself brevity. :)x
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lol it takes a bit of practice – I have tried to learn – pfft – you do what you are comfy with – not a judge not jury here 🙂 x
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Long-winded is my comfort zone. :)x
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