Bring no roses
Send no card
No words for
One mere day…..
Light candles,
Cast petals,
Pour bubbles
To filling,
Fill glasses
Of ruby,
Submersion,
Show willing.
Immersion
So heated,
Eyes closing
To scene,
Search lightly,
Touch softly,
You know what
This means.
Ease tension,
Relax some,
Liquidity’s
Pool,
Sip, savour
Taste trodden,
Bask, sample,
Let’s duel.
Now pat some
To dry off,
Massage
With the oil,
Touch there, please
And there, yes!
That’s how
To spoil.
Now your turn,
Turn over,
Lay flat
On your face,
Kneading
With purpose,
Now deepening
The pace.
Turn round now
Beside me,
Lean closer,
That’s right.
So eyes meet,
Bedazzled,
A wondrous
Sight.
You’re glistening
With unguents
And I’m shining
Too,
Now nibble on
Strawberries,
First one,
Maybe two.
Share kisses
So sweetened
By fruit
And the vine,
Taste my tongue
And savour
Desire
So divine.
Together now,
Darling,
Let’s build
The desire
With tumbles
Of touches,
Engaging
The fire
Hands roaming,
So tenderly,
It tickles
Like hell,
I giggle,
Can’t help it.
You know me
So well.
Now kisses
Are burning,
There’s fever
Afoot,
Teeth nip
With pleasure
No acid,
This fruit.
It’s gorgeous,
So fulsome
And bursting
With juice,
Come, lover,
Let’s get on,
We must
Call a truce
To teasing
No further,
We need to
Explore
The wonders
Of loving,
Let’s give
Some more.
You take me,
I take you,
We give,
We receive
Now, let’s speak,
‘I love you’.
These words,
I believe.
http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2014/02/10/writing-challenge-valentine/
“I’ll have what SHE’S having!” – When Harry Met Sally, a very appropriate quote for this post. Ooh la la!
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Lol. I remember the scene well…..;) x
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Yes, ME too! LOL
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😉 x
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Romance perfectly penned, my dear friend!!! LOVED it!!!
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Thank you, Desiree. In the spirit of….:) x
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Does your hubby know you were dreaming of the Hughman for this entire poem?
Peace & Love
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…..I might not have been…..And i certainly enjoyed my bath!…..:) x
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Why are you talking funny? LOL
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I’m censoring myself! 🙂 x
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Reblogged this on Mind Chatter and commented:
Ok, one really hot steamy poem from my friend, Scottishmomus, for Valentine’s Day. That is it! No more discussion please.
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Quite right, Rene….all this talk of Valentine’s…it’s enough to make you fan yourself…or something. 😉
Thanks for the reblog.
Back to politics now? Emmmm, maybe not quite yet. 🙂 x
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Well, I was thinking this morning (no jokes) and I can only recall one (1, uno, a single) good Valentine’s Day, and it wasn’t from when I was married, either time. Hey, when a kid in kindergarten knocks you off your chair, tackles you on the ground for a damn kiss, and the whole class laughs at you, for your first Valentine’s Day, you gotta’ know they are all going to be shit from then on. True story.
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I’d search him out. That’s a boy that promised passion! 🙂 x
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Or a potential sexual predator, stalker, rapist, etc.
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yeah, well I suppose there’s always that. 😦 x
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This is wonderful! I love it! Hugs x
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Thanks, Shirley. 🙂 Hugs.x
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Love the pace and feeling in this poem.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 x
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Woohoo! This book is getting thicker by the minute! I’m glad there’s a breeze blowing here at the moment…very warm in here 🙂
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I’ll split it into sections then. And put a caution on the steamy section. Or provide a fan. 🙂 x
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lol. Your so funny momus, I can just imagine your book selling in the shop with one of those clip on fans instead of a light! Or maybe a two in one, now there’s a selling point for you 🙂
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You’ve got me thinking again. 😉 x
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What a wonderfully rhythmic whimsical fun poem! I almost didn’t want it to end. I love this so much. Great work!
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Thank you! It was fun to write. 🙂 x
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Oh my goodness…why is my man at work??? – steamy, sultry, sex, raw, love. 🙂 x
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And a bit of a giggle too. 🙂 x
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Beautiful, just beautiful
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Thank you so much for saying so.x
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Gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous! 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂 x
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Just the right amount of sensual anticipation and laughter. Absolutely perfect.
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Thanks, Susan. 🙂 x
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Ooh – I think I’ll have that too…. just time to find that something slinky 😉
Enjoy
Susan x
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Enjoy! 🙂 x
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