Ennobled rank
by virtue of affliction,
Self-condemnation masks
the pooling tears.
His challenge cup
once poisoned by a dragon,
Tormented by its torching;
burning sears.
Intrinsic to his quest
there lives a code,
No law may break his bones;
his strength engendered.
On steed of worth,
his face full-painted woad,
Armoured heart encrusted;
gems to render.
Immortal risk too far
he dare not try,
Though wounds of flesh
may bleed until the end.
Scarred soul he saves,
thus he will not lie;
This, his one and truest,
loyal friend.
Alter-egoed grip
upon the reins,
Steadfast in irons,
soldered to his feet.
Another hero’s heel
in wounded pain
Adjunct to failing trial,
none to meet.
Through storms and mountain glens
he wends his way,
Howling tempest smothers
heartfelt cry.
No joy on earth to wish
his heart to stay,
All hope gone,
anguished wish to die.
Softest breathing kelpie
heard his pleas,
Veiled as creature
tempting to his fate.
Brought errant knight
upon his knees
Submerged his soul,
became his life-long mate.
Whisper when you travel
in the fey lands.
In winds and breaths of air
each curse is heard,
Capricious creatures cover
more than Highlands,
Their charm to hear
each pent-up, heartfelt word.
superb – puts me in mind of Braveheart
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More of a ‘Highlander’ movie fan here. More magic in it. But watching either of them sets the internal bagpipes skirling. 🙂 Thank you for commenting, Paul. It’s good to know you enjoyed it.x
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Wonderful, Anne-Marie – and, by an extraordinary coincidence, I have just done a meditation which featured, amongst other things, members of the Fey riding upon delicate steeds! xxx
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Must be Spring. The fey is rising. Along with the sap. 😉 Are you going to do a post on the meditation? I’d be interested in that, Ali. A little magic from lots of quarters. 🙂 x
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Excellent idea, Anne-Marie; I shall try and write it up over the weekend. Thanks for the suggestion. xxx
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Look forward to it, Ali. x
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كلمات جميلة
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شكرا جزيلا
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Is this based on some kind of a Scottish tale? I’m getting that vibe though I could be 100% wrong.
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Not a Scottish tale, no. Although a little bit of Scots mythology mixed with imagination. 🙂 x
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Nice. I’m more familiar with Greek and a bit of Roman mythology so i’m a bit clueless about Scots mythology 🙂
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I love pretty much all mythology. Although I probably am more familiar with the Greek stuff myself. Just loved it as a kid and never outgrew it. 🙂 x
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Nice writing!
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Thank you. 🙂 x
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Just lovely. Yes, I saw Highlander in it (also a fan). Wonderful imagery. Makes we want to visit Scotland and drink in the sights, sounds, aromas; taste and touch everything you describe.
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Date in the Highlands it is then. A hauf and some magic while the wind whistles through the chimney of an old pub and we set the world to rights in front of a roaring fire. Jeez! I’m there. 😉 x
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😀 Hugs! I’ll start saving today!
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You’d love it. We both would. I’m overdue for a bit of mountain air. 😉 x
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Thank you.x
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Your Welcome
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