I built castles in the sky,
You destroyed with sneering eye,
The clouds I wove to cloak my soul
You dispersed – a pointless goal-
To prove to me that dreams and flair
Were naught but smoke adrift in air.
But still I build a staircase wide,
Earthen bricks joined side by side
With fairy dust and faith and hope,
An optimist’s plaited, tangled rope
Suspended from the tower ledge,
Escapee’s route for lover’s pledge.
And, in the abseil from that place,
My eyes stay fixed on grace’s face,
Formed in clouds in my own sky,
Where none may blind my inner eye.
Superb.
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Thank you, John.
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Beautiful – great poem.
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Many thanks.
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Beautiful. Unstoppable!
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Thank you, Kerry. I hope you and your lovely family are going from strength to strength.x
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Onward and upward. Lots of balls being juggled but they are all still in the air. xo
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Glad to hear it, Kerry.x
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You weave words so magically, I particularly like the phrase “with fairy dust and faith and hope”.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, Chess. Thank you for reading and your lovely comment.x
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Stunning write!
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I’m delighted you think so. Many thanks.x
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This is amazing. Well done, and thank you for sharing. I especially like the clouds you “wove to cloak” your soul. Perfect words!! 🙂
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You’re very kind. Thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment.x
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Great cadence. Your poem flows with Classical style, and sounds wonderful read out loud. I like the resolute positivity of your theme too.
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Do you do that too?! I read aloud so many of those poets I follow that I forever sound as if I’m talking to myself. Thank you for reading and such a positive comment, Chris.x
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Certainly do. I feel that, for many poems, they only really have life when voiced.
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I’m like that too! I read then think it reads another reading with voice. And it can make all the difference. Well met, Chris! 🙂 x
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Beautifully written momus. That’s for the book for sure 🙂
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Maybe. Eventually. 😉 x
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This is amazing!
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I’m thinking that in order for something to feel amazing, it must be because it speaks to something you already know. Which kinda means that you are ambazing. We feel. We know. How cool is that?! I’m in awe that anything I could write rings bells with someone else. Thank you for such an amazing compliment. Dream on.x
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how beautiful! I love your poetry, it speaks to my soul and makes me want to laugh and weep. Thank you.
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What a beautiful compliment. Thank you, DAF.x
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