I wonder, sometimes,
if the words of another
reveal me to me
better than mine,
If, in sharing
their thoughts on the page,
cosmic held hands
raise ridiculous to sublime.
It’s not that I think
that I cannot convey
most visions
that whirl in my mind
But I wonder
if inhaling
words from another,
some truths are easier to find.
Usually works that way for me, I also find others find a different side of me in my own words that I didn’t realize was there. Kind of like therapy! 😉 Good piece!
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Thanks, Daniel. It is kind of weird when other people say exactly what you feel better than you know yourself. And as you rightly say, identify aspects maybe unintended in our own. Although I always remember being a bit annoyed at school doing analysis of poems/plays etc and the teacher definitively stating the author’s intention, dismissing my own interpretation (!) and me thinking, ‘How the feck do you know what they were thinking? Maybe they didn’t mean that at all.’ I suppose we see what we want to see in others’ words.
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I think sometimes we appreciate others’ words more than our own, believing that they are sometimes more valid than our own. I do find that the opinions of others can, on occasions, bring new perspectives to our own work, but, at the end of the day, it all comes down to what words mean on a personal level. Well put, Anne-Marie.
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SO deep and so very beautiful.
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Thank you, Nicodemas.
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were it not so, we should never read
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So true, Paul.
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