dust of seemed swallow secured on grey slate
risen dessication its fate
forever entranced, disabled by time
flightless now ever in state
dust of arced angel arrested alone
ached by stillness in stone
nary the one nor other may move
struck in time, brief and long gone
impressions imprinted, immobilised
impossible gifts to new eyes
cast by creation then clefted to wait
separated from life ‘mid soft sighs
I like this. Each time that I have read it I seem to get a slightly different perspective. To me this speaks of a stalemate, both personally and in terms of our world and, indeed, nature. Are we at a cross-roads? Is there some force, or forces, battling over our destiny? A fascinating poem, Anne-Marie. Great use of alliteration, by the way!
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Thanks, Chris. I love where your thoughts have gone with this. I was very much thinking of the impermanent nature of all life, the relics left behind in fossils, in statues, in a sort of frozen legacy. Are we bound by the same things, incapable of movement and change? On the same page here, I think. 🙂
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If that isn’t the creation, life and dying of a statue, I don’t know what is 🙂
You got me with this one. Really got me thinking though momus 🙂
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I like that poetry can do that. 🙂 Believe it or not, it started off because I found a dead moth I think it must have been, its exact shape in a little pile of dusty remains, but it lookd like a swallow. From there, that got me thinking of fossils and statues and time being frozen. Then my mind just went places I can’t explain! Off on all sorts of tangents. I’m glad you liked it, Mark. Always good to be thinking. 🙂
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Very well written momus. Got me wanting to go into it and ‘see’ what you were feeling 🙂
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careful – your genius is showing
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I wish! More like too few hours sleep. 🙂
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