[(Awarded 1st Place) Great Grandmother by SFC Lance Widner – Division 1 (Active Duty Military) CC by 2.0]
The light weighs no more than seven pounds or one hundred,
fuses the two in joint weightlessness,
gifts a vision, transcendent,
reveals what was and is and a voice says, Come.
Question is not asked nor answer given though it hangs
on pillows and white cotton,
a wondering, hopeful question,
am I thus renewed
and the light blinks,
bats eyes in coy allusion,
it is not mine to tell
but lift, with me, this easy burden,
bring your child home.
Written for Mindlovemisery’s Photo Challenge #92 and Haddon Musings’ Senior Salon #3. For some reason, best known to my Kindle browser upgrade, I can’t copy and paste the links. I’ll do that when I fire up my laptop tomorrow – well, today, but I’m going to sleep now. Hope I wake! I hate an unfinished job.
Woke, worked, shopped, still doing, Merry Christmas, not wrapped yet but got the links updated. I call that a score. 😉
the cycle of life…amazing.
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Thank you, Holly. I hope you have a lovely Christmas.x
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Wonderful and beautiful!
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Thank you, Nic. And a merry Christmas to you and your good lady. 🙂 x
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Thank you! Merry Christmas to you and your family, and blessings this coming year!
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Whoa. Beautiful and intense and bittersweet. In a lifetime, the baby will be the great grandmother holding her great-grandchild and so the circle will continue. This one hit me right in my heart. ❤
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Aw, thanks, Diana. Full circle’s the way. Hope you have a lovely Christmas.x
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Simply beautiful.
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Thank you. 🙂 Merry Christmas!
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A powerful piece which reflects our journey wonderfully, Anne-Marie. All the best for the hols and for a peaceful new year.
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Thank you, Chris. Just the wrapping to do now! Getting one of my elves on to that. 😉 Have a great one!
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A post to to treasure. The words and the picture fill your heart with the wonder of how we all have filled and will fill many different roles in our lives. Thank you for taking the time to post.
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Thank you for the invite. 🙂 Merry Christmas to you and yours.x
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thank you so much for sharing your response to the photo challenge 🙂
This is such an evocative and powerfully written piece, creative content that reaches into the heart of life and its meaning – crafted with insight and a tenderness that is deeply moving. Your choice of words is stunning –
Question is not asked nor answer given though it hangs
on pillows and white cotton,
what a simply incredibly unique phrase – so full of resonance and meaning
Cheers ~ Pat
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Thank you, Pat, for such a lovely comment. It was a pleasure to take part. 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank you. 🙂
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