I count their blessings
less defined than mine
I count theirs first
that fear in all unknowing
going onwards
disappointed innocence
that’s the worst
All signs in prospect
so elusive
unknown quantities
hazards blind
I steer, advise them
watch and catch them
pointing once again
in hopes they find
Their own distinct paths
though all roads trodden
worn before by others
new to them
I count their blessings
give directions
then stand aside
to let them learn
They’re going forwards
I’ve been there, done that
racing eagerly
all steps a risk
I count their blessings
embrace them as mine
one to seven growing
on my list
Wonderful poetry.
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Thanks, Nic. 🙂
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Love it.
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Posted too soon. I hope you and your seven blessings had a lovely Christmas and lots of adventures in 2016
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We did. All gathered together for a few days. I hope yours was great too. And best wishes for the New Year.x
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I really like the imagery of knowing the young through counting their blessings. Hope you post at the Senior Salon tomorrow.
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Thanks. I didn’t think I’d make it but got there in the end. 🙂
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I cannot imagine a more fortunate brood than they who have you as their mother
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Aw, thanks. I keep telling them that. 🙂
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