I started this last night as a romantic love poem but it got away from me. I can’t see any man (or woman) in this light, which rather leaves my poor husband in an awkward place, with some stiff competition. And me right there beside him. Much as we might like to emulate the love I speak of, I guess we all find it beyond us for the most part. With the exception, maybe, of a parents’ love for their children. And even that, sadly, is not guaranteed. I work in schools. I know.
I suppose you might view this as my love poem to one who loves the way I’d like to. I don’t think he’d mind. He’s my pal. Some days, right enough, we’re not on speaking terms and I nag him like a good wife would till he gets his act together. I reckon, though, he did have it together and we’re the ones with the agape complexes.
he could bend the wings of angels with every he breath he took
melt the polar icecaps should they chance to take a look
tremor earth’s foundations until they moaned and shook
and all because of who he was back then
he could turn the heavens inside out with a wink of careless eye
slow down time’s momentum with the softest, gentlest sigh
turn the tides upon themselves so moon would give a cry
and all because of who he was back then
he could penetrate the minds of men and give them faith within
bestow the light of wisdom with a wave or with a grin
he could walk upon the waters by such grace no need to swim
and all because of who he was back then
he could be the man he was because he loved by clear default
he believed in power of love to do all things and hatred halt
he showed us how but something in our makeup is at fault
and all because of who we are since way back when
we could be the love he is if we let him live again
we could resurrect his ways and maybe then
we could walk upon the waters and grace the earth again
and all because we learn to truly love like him
Very lovely. Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you for reading and your kind comment.x
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This is lovely!
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Thanks, Leslie.x
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“we could be the love he is if we let him live again” If we let – that is the key, isn’t it? He is alive, waiting to be set free from inside our hearts. Oh, Anne-Marie, lovely doesn’t do this poem justice. Thank you for this Valentine poem – form Him.
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for Him. sorry.
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It seems so obvious, doesn’t it, Susan. But we’re usually so focused on romantic love we forget the big love. Hope he liked it. I’ll probably be nagging him again tomorrow. 🙂
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This is simply just so very beautiful…and moving and a perfect poem about Love. I love the lilt of the lines, they flow like water with so much grace and hope. Thank you for this! 💟
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Thank you, Krysia. That’s such a beautiful comment. ❤
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I think that this speaks of the ‘better part’ of love. What is important, I feel, is not to allow life to strangle such feelings. Well worth reading and reading again.
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Thanks, Chris. Sometimes it feels like we just don’t get it as a race. I’m every bit as guilty but it’s worth being reminded.
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It made me think of ‘Love’ by George Herbert. Not the form, but the content. Thought provoking. Thank you.
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I’m not familiar with him, April but I will search and have a read. Thank you for reading too.x
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George Herbert is the poet I could least do without and John Donne would come a close second, but I’m very much someone who lives in the past.
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Very beautiful momus, and I think written from what you both have become….because way down deep, he still is your love because of where you’ve been together, sharing a journey that can teach no other but to walk on water 🙂
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you’ve taken us all to church with these sanguine sentiments
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